Dream Haiku Collective

[Vex]

A place to creatively express our dreams in haiku form, it you're up for it.

Nine
into spring she steals
'twixt tree and twig and tangle
willow nine intrigues

[Sunshine]

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[Vex]

  I should have posted that in the introductory post. Thanks Moonbeam. I've only ever written haiku the way the educational overlords taught me to write them in school, 5-7-5. I think I'll try the other ways next time I attempt this. But for now...

To Orodruin
thinking she's mad-struck
mortals no and slink away
from a ring wraith vexed

[Sunshine]

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[Shellidfl]

Great haiku, MB, and very appropriate this year for so many of us.

[Sunshine]

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[Vex]

My first haiku:

April snow yet falls
In the forests of the mind
Eternal summer

  Moonbeam. That's absolutely gorgeous. 

[Sunshine]

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[Vex]

No.
Thank you, Moonbeam.
 

[Vex]

Try another...

No LD for Me

Music, bodies, pain
Shelvis looms to the rescue
Round man bounding, fades

[Shellidfl]

Not totally related at all, but I won some giant pumpkin seeds for the following Haiku

"Vines
Creeping on the ground
Flowers turning into gourds
Pumpkin pie in fall"
Seeds are in the mail!

[iadr]

April snow yet falls
In the forests of the mind
Eternal summer

Here's iadr's first attempt using Moonbeams example:

April snow yet falls
In everywhere except Florida
Where it's hotter than hell.

[Sunshine]

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[Vex]

Wow, Shellidfl. I wish I could wins stuff for stuff I write. Can you make pumpkin pies out of giant pumpkins or are they just for show?

iadr, stop bragging or Imma go to Florida and bring winter with me.

[Sunshine]

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