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Dream Haiku Collective
« on: April 21, 2013, 01:33:47 AM »
A place to creatively express our dreams in haiku form, it you're up for it.

Nine
into spring she steals
'twixt tree and twig and tangle
willow nine intrigues
The impossible is possible tonight. ~Smashing Pumpkins 
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2013, 09:09:25 AM »
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2013, 11:46:52 AM »
 :doh: I should have posted that in the introductory post. Thanks Moonbeam. I've only ever written haiku the way the educational overlords taught me to write them in school, 5-7-5. I think I'll try the other ways next time I attempt this. But for now...

To Orodruin
thinking she's mad-struck
mortals no and slink away
from a ring wraith vexed
The impossible is possible tonight. ~Smashing Pumpkins 
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2013, 02:04:27 PM »
Great haiku, MB, and very appropriate this year for so many of us. :)

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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #6 on: April 21, 2013, 02:43:37 PM »
My first haiku:

April snow yet falls
In the forests of the mind
Eternal summer


 :o Moonbeam. That's absolutely gorgeous.  :love:
The impossible is possible tonight. ~Smashing Pumpkins 
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #8 on: April 21, 2013, 06:49:36 PM »
No.
Thank you, Moonbeam.
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The impossible is possible tonight. ~Smashing Pumpkins 
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #9 on: April 30, 2013, 11:00:52 PM »
Try another...

No LD for Me

Music, bodies, pain
Shelvis looms to the rescue
Round man bounding, fades
The impossible is possible tonight. ~Smashing Pumpkins 
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #10 on: April 30, 2013, 11:19:28 PM »
Not totally related at all, but I won some giant pumpkin seeds for the following Haiku ;-D

"Vines
Creeping on the ground
Flowers turning into gourds
Pumpkin pie in fall"
Seeds are in the mail!

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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #11 on: May 01, 2013, 07:23:40 PM »
April snow yet falls
In the forests of the mind
Eternal summer
Here's iadr's first attempt using Moonbeams example:

April snow yet falls
In everywhere except Florida
Where it's hotter than hell.
Beg and Bas: HA GG TR LM CL SO LC RS FL LW TD
Int: EF BI JR DC WH CT CW IA WA TA WT JT RA WW WF RA MF WF BO TK
Advanced: TT AN OB CS BH ST
Sea:
All tasks completed. Going through a second time.

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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2013, 06:38:04 PM »
Wow, Shellidfl. I wish I could wins stuff for stuff I write. Can you make pumpkin pies out of giant pumpkins or are they just for show?

iadr, stop bragging or Imma go to Florida and bring winter with me. :P
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Re: Dream Haiku Collective
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